Notes on Peer Eval for my 2nd Essay:

  • Rosen p. 307: Introduction = Create a context, state your claim, explain the tool.
  • Add to intro:
    • How the primary group has effected my life
    • How I populate myself throughout the day
    • Learn about me to learn about the theory
  • Introduce the Tools:
    • Relevant to the analysis?
    • Introduced authors, not tools
      • Turn summaries into tools
  • State the Claim:
    • Be more specific on claim
    • Conclusion of analysis
  • Overall:
    • Be more specific, too broad, generalized. Focus on what I am trying to show.
    • Background on me
  • Conduct the analysis
    • Paragraph 1: establish primary group influence on me
    • Paragraph 2: show multiphrenia but show primary group influence
    • Paragraph 3: possibly more of #2
  • Conclusion: